It’s easy to preach like a commentary. Either you lift content out of a commentary and preach it, or you write your message like you were writing a commentary. It leads to a set of headings superimposed on the text, and sometimes superimposed on a projector screen too. The Problem of Prayer, The Power of Prayer, The Perspecuity of Prayer. Or perhaps, Saul’s Condition, Saul’s Conversion, Saul’s Conviction.
This kind of outlining might suggest that the preacher thinks the greatest goal in preaching is to offer a set of memory aids to help the listener hang their thoughts in a biblical passage. It suggests that historical and biblical information is the key ingredient for life transformation. It suggests a lack of awareness of the possibilities for more pastoral care in and through preaching.
A couple of suggestions:
1. Try changing your view of “points” from titles to full sentences. A full sentence requires a verb and will more actively engage the listener than a title can.
2. Try writing your sentences in contemporary rather than historical terms. Whenever possible it is worth taking the opportunity to speak with relevance to the listeners. This can be done at the end, of course, but also in the introduction, in every transition, within each point, and also within the phrasing of each point. Make the point applicational and then support that from the text.
3. Don’t pour your energy into creating a memorable outline, but into effectively conveying the message of the text. When alliteration and parallelism falls into your lap, great, consider using them. But actually our energies will often be better invested in thinking through how to reconvey the already powerful message of the text, rather than trying to help people remember an outline. Lives are changed by the text, by the main idea, by the application of the passage, by connecting with God and with the speaker. Lives are not changed by outlines.