Preaching Means Picking Words – Part 2

Yesterday we considered the challenge of picking the right words to convey the message when we preach.  We need to be precise rather than slack, but strive to communicate rather than to demonstrate our verbal or intellectual prowess.  Here’s another factor to throw into the mix:

Lofty language languishes. Is lofty language the same thing as pulpit pomposity?  Yes and no.  Pompous words are chosen to show off our intellect (or are used carelessly without intent to show off).  Lofty language may be used to show off our spirituality (or simply be used without thinking because we are used to it in our church circles, or because we mistake it for some sort of spiritual humility and genuinely motivated demonstration of sanctification).  The fact is that in almost every setting, listeners find lofty language and tone to be distant, unengaging and even off-putting.  While it may have been acceptable in a previous generation, it seems that in most places the tolerance for inauthentic communication forms has diminished drastically.  In the western cultures, at least, the majority of listeners now esteem authenticity and natural communication.  Having a pulpit voice or a pulpit vocabulary is not worth it, even if it once was (which is a very questionable “if”).

Lofty language languishes, it doesn’t stand up tall and demand that listeners engage with it and its message. Ok, that paragraph was a long one, so I’ll leave it there and add a part three to this series of posts.

One thought on “Preaching Means Picking Words – Part 2

  1. I very much agree. And you sometimes run into Lofty Language even in blog comment threads!

    Wish I could write like that to give an example, but you must have run across it here and there. Seems that ultra-conservatives are most likely to engage in this. The remarks sound kind of like they’re trying to do an imitation of an Old Testament prophet and often sound notes of Dire Warning if you don’t happen to agree with them…

    Then they usually sign off with stuff like “Blessings” or “I”ll pray for you,” especially if they’ve just insulted you, lol…!

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